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《教和养,手打作文600字》500字:是一种养分作文600字

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作文一:《教和养,手打作文600字》500字

教和养

教和养是中华民族千百年来一直注重的传统,但现在却被越来越多的现代人所忽视。所淡忘,所以,我就要说说教和养的区别,教和养的重要性,让人们更重视教和养。

所谓的教和养,其实就是教育与修养。教育是修养的基础,修养是教育的提升。教育在《孟子》中就提到教育是君子三乐之一,教育,是对人才的发掘,对幼儿的启迪,这同时包括多方面的教育,心理教育,道德教育,知识教育等等。教育当中的每一个环节都不可或缺。中国的教育更偏向,重视知识的教育,人们称之为应试教育。这样的教育很容易让学生失去对学习的兴趣。对于教育来说,我也是个受教育的人,我感受到了教育带给我的博学的气质,教育让我学会了许多知识,也让我懂得了许多道理。可见教育对一个人是有多么大的影响啊!

修养是指一个人的综合素质,是在多方面体现出来的,比如:礼仪,文化等等元素都涵盖其中。唐代诗人吕岩的《忆江南》诗中就写了修行后的样子。修养不仅仅是一个表象,一个人给他人带来有修养的感觉,是源自日常生活中文化的积累让自身言行举止文明得体!社会当中,有许多有修养的人和没有修养的人。有修养的人不论富贵,都会受到他人的尊重与称赞。而没有修养的人只会让他人瞧不起而受到别人的冷落。

我——作为一个受过教育的人人,在生活中是有基础修养的,言行方面有时会因为情绪的激动而爆粗口,所以这一点是我要改正的。

中华民族五千年的文化,如果连教和养都做不好,那就别说自己是中国人了!

作文二:《作文班作文》800字

困难成就人才

六(4班   华莎

如果麦子没有考验,就无法收成;如果老鹰不经历风雨,就无法飞向蓝天;如果人类没有考验,就无法进步。

农夫错误地认为一路上如果没有风雨,麦子便会更加饱满,却没有想到,如果不经历风雨,怎能有彩虹?

“一旦避开了所有考验,麦子就变得无能了。对于一粒麦子,努力奋斗是不可避免的,风雨是必要的,烈日是必要的,蝗虫的必要的,它们可以唤醒麦子内在的灵魂。”上帝是这样说的。没错,如果避免困难,我们就像这麦子一样,只不过是一具行尸走肉的空壳!

如果没有困难,鸟儿便不会飞翔。每只鸟儿出生的时候,都必须自己“破壳而出”,不能有父母帮忙,不能有兄弟姐妹帮忙,只能靠自己,靠双翅的力量爬出蛋壳,才有展翅飞翔的本领。当每个人出生时,都注定会遇到困难。困难降临时,你选择面对还是逃避?我选择面对!在暴风雨中成长,脊梁自然变硬,精神自然顽强。而逃避,再次遇到困难,只不过是时间的问题,在困难中努力,坚强,才有飞翔的技能与能力。

如果没有困难,生命将不再延续。大自然里,弱肉强食是自然想象。但,假如兔子不但逃避大型食肉动物的追杀,而不去想个既能保命又能安居乐业的办法,他总有一天会被捕食。如果弱小的动物不去适应自然界的规律,他们将永远被大自然开除。生命的延续只有两个选择,燃烧或腐烂。我毅然选择燃烧!即使再强大,总会遇到看着能压垮天的困难,但,在燃烧的时候就是在成长自己,困难使你学会坚毅!

如果没有困难,社会将不会进步。澳大利亚昆士兰大学一群学者为研究:“一团焦油从烟囱滴落的情况”,整整用了81年,他们在81年遇到了不少困难,但他们一直坚持着,从没放弃过,终于获得了“搞笑版”诺贝尔物理学奖。在困难中,学者一次有一次地实验,一次有一次遇到不同的困难,终于有了今天的成就,才使人类科技又进了一步,而自己也变得勇敢无畏。

遇到困难,你去挑战,不期望脚下处处阳关道,不幻想头顶一片艳阳天。面对困难,挑战困难,成就当今的人才。

人的灵魂也和麦子相同,如果没有考验,人也只是一个空壳罢了!

作文三:《作文啊作文》2100字

小学的那些年我常会做同样的一个梦——某一天老师宣布没有作文这项作业了——我们欢呼着,那种心情比听说中国男足踢进世界杯更为激动;再看看讲台上的老师,她忽然在这一天变得无比亲切——这样的她,我们又怎会在她背后对她有些臃肿的身材叽叽歪歪,或是给她起几个像“南瓜”、“白菜”之类的绰号?但这个梦总像彩色泡泡那样美丽易碎。梦醒后想起好像有篇作文还没有写,便强忍梦想破灭的伤感,从床上爬起来,开始挑灯夜战——把《作文大全》之类的书翻得“哗啦”作响,可能偶尔还要越过海峡,把台湾小朋友的作文找来借鉴一下……作文啊作文,真是想说爱你不容易!

我记得小学每周都有几节固定的作文课。课上,全班同学坐成黑压压的一片,听老师布置完一个题目后,开始埋头苦干,“制造”作文。这时全班鸦雀无声,只有在课桌底下翻书的声音。当然,偶尔也会冒出这样的怪声——“喂,你这是什么破作文书啊?!怎么找不到这个题目?我的妈呀,这下完蛋了!”这位说话的同学一脸无奈与失落,像可怜的拿破仑在圣约翰山上望不到援军,只能眼瞅着“一世英明”毁于滑铁卢。熬到下课时,他的脸成了紫红色。我心中想,该同学不会是有孙悟空身魂分离的本事,刚才跑到南海请观世音菩萨了吧?后来他的同桌向我透露说他两节课只写了三百字,那脸色全是憋出来的。写作文的艰难何止我这位同学一人经历过,恐怕诸君都有同感。大家挖空心思,想写出好作文——我的一位同学用了一个暑假去背《成语词典》,结果成效终于是有了——她的作文里,女孩子的相貌必定是“蛾眉皓齿”,嘴巴必定是“樱桃小口”,连笑都必须是“莞尔一笑”。我一直对她作文中的人物存不存在于现实有着巨大怀疑,不然不能一见实在是种遗憾。

小学时,自从换了语文老师,我的作文很少得“优”,最常就是得个“良”,有时候“良”的屁股后面灰溜溜地跟个加号。原因归结为一点,就是我写的全是真人、真事、真感情,少了所谓“优秀作文”要求的那些“假话”。像“给老奶奶让座”、“帮邻居大妈打扫卫生”、“拾到几元钱交给警察叔叔”……初看时颇为感人,但看得太久也使人有了免疫力,再看不出什么新鲜感。我一直以为作文中的情感是“一次性”的,是自己一段时间甚至一刹那的感受,往往一次过后不会再有。古希腊哲学家赫拉克利特说过“人不能两次踩入同一条河流”,这句朴素的哲理也说明一个事实:美景与真情错过便不会再有。现在我看同龄人写的小说,发现他们竟把作文中的毛病带进了文学——小说中的场景与结局都很固定,像中国男足与巴西男足的比赛一样毫无悬念,看了开头便知道结局,看了结局就能猜出过程。作文啊作文,影响我们的程度之深,让我们至今在创作时仍不能彻底走出那个固定的模式。

我其实该庆幸,因为家里人稍懂文学。每次老师批完作文,爷爷总会再批一遍。往往学校里得了“良”的作文爷爷会批上“优”,有时得了“优”的作文爷爷反而批上了“差”。所以我不会像别的孩子一样,若作文成绩不佳就一把鼻涕一把泪。我甚至认为作文教会了许多孩子撒谎。我不知道他们当初写某些作文的时候会不会脸红,因为有些情节明显不符合生活逻辑,明显是生般硬套,常常会闹出像“关公战秦琼”的笑话。想当初,我们班上有些同学自我标榜对文学有较高的悟性,而且还有同学称在说不上名字的某报上发表过作品——虽然大家像看不到火星人一样看不见那篇文章,可这毕竟说明人家在文学感悟上“高人一筹”啊!

前些年在报上看到我小学同学的文章,读后竟有种“老友重逢”的动情。这些年他似乎变化不大,读他的文章有种亲切感,使我回忆起了六七十人在一间教室里“憋作文”的场景。想当年写课堂习作,总是还没下笔,如“怜惜小猫、小狗”、“海上日出”、“赞美胡杨”之类的题材就不请自来,现在仍挥之不去,真是“请神容易送神难”。

小A是我文学上的挚友,经常给我发短信,一直劝我多读青春文学。当我拿着老舍、钱钟书、沈从文的书走在学校里的时候,大多数同学手捧韩寒、郭敬明的书,爱不释手,见我执迷不悟便说我老土。其实,“八O后”、“九O后”青春作者的书我几乎都读过,但读过什么书不一定非要跑着告诉满世界人。我常思考的是韩寒、郭敬明当年读的是什么书,在他们之前为何没有王寒或是李敬明在文坛走红。一个人要写好作文乃至文学,没有高贵血统的书籍奠基,其作品必然无法长存。这一点只要反过来看韩寒、郭敬明的成长历程与阅读习惯就能得到验证。

今年在上海和一群天南海北不常见面的文友谈作文时,大家都认为高考作文中的好文章是沧海一粟;公认二OO八年高考中,上海学生黄莎写的《他们》,从文风到内容上焕然一新,算得上是好文章。而我认为,没有自己体会的文章谈不上深刻。看《华商报》的作文版时,常关注有自己体会和丰富细节的小学生作文。这些文章虽然短小却耐人寻味,大都简单却记录了生活。从这些文章中,我往往能得到一些启发。

我认为,写好作文首先要摆脱已形成的框架,才能有所突破。四平八稳的文章难免千篇一律,众口一词。古人说“文似看山不喜平”,近代的胡适先生有句名言“有什么话就说什么话”,这两句话对于我们如何写好一篇作文都很有启示。

我不禁感叹,上帝把牛顿派到人间,于是人间有了光明;而我又该对你说什么好呀,作文啊作文!

作文四:《作文:作文迷》1300字

作者题记:满纸荒唐言,一把辛酸泪。都云作者痴,谁解其中味。——曹雪芹《红楼梦》语

自从我第一次见到《课堂内外·创新作文》和“创新作文网”,我就喜欢上了作文,变成了一个作文迷,可我发现,最近我却“升级”为“作文控”。

2015年12月的“吹牛大王”让写一篇“世界之最”的作文,我突然来了灵感,开始动笔写起来,我每天“如饥似渴”不停地写,等我写完后,我发现作文早已过期。我看到2016年1月的题目要求是“大”,我想,我的这篇作文,不就是一篇“大”作文吗?我赶忙将题目改过来,美其名曰《我的大作文》。并将我的“大作文”输入电脑,准备投稿。谁知等我把作文输入完,一看时间,2016年3月。天哪,又过期了。我本以为我的作文能弄一个“杂采”,这回连“精华”也得不到了。哎!“普通”就普通吧。既然写了,就把他发出去吧。于是,我开始向“创新作文网”发送,可是不知什么原因,作文就是发送不出去。好久,电脑突然停机,再也打不开。“哎呀!我家的电脑怎么突然停机,打不开了呀!”我听到左领右舍的邻居都这样喊。我焦急的到外面了解情况,谁知,我听到满世界的人都这样说,我开始意识到,难道是我的那篇大作文……?

回到家,我打开电视,听到电视里报道:“今天,由于一个小学生写了一篇大作文,想通过网络发送,由于作文太大,导致全世界的网络毁坏,凡是开着的电脑系统破坏。主持人在播出的同时,我们家的电视变得只能听到声音,却看不见图像。这时,主持人说,建议各家快关掉电视,那篇大作文马上就会把各家的电视撑毁,现在可能有的电视机已经收看不到图像……

如果,有一天,警察找到我,让我赔偿,那肯定会是一笔天文数字。趁别人还没发现,还是赶紧把稿件寄出去吧,于是我又想到使用快递。爸爸找了99辆大挂车,费了九牛二虎之力,好不容易才把我的稿件运到镇上。在打包的时候,由于作文对我的吸引力太大了,一下把我吸到了作文里,没办法,爸爸只好把我也打进快件里(真的,我可不是畏罪潜逃)。幸亏中国有高铁,不到半天,我和稿件一起就被运到了编辑部。(后来听说,因为运送我的作文,高铁也出了问题,山东到重庆的线路,停车维修半年。)周。主编见到稿件,说:“这是第10000001个“作文控”,都是“创新作文”的“吹牛大王”给害的啊。于是拨打了110、120、119……各种急救电话来救我,可是,把他们都急成了“精神控”,也没有办法。于是,又打电话请了全世界的科学家来,他们个个都束手无策,一个个都变成了“精神控”。

到底还是周。主编有办法,他扔过来一个包,我打开一看,原来是一篇约稿函和纸笔,题目是《中国梦·世界的梦》。我想,周。主编是要害我,还是要我以毒攻毒?上面还有提示:中国高铁缩短了世界的距离,使世界变小……我赶紧按照提示写起来,觉得作文正在和世界一起飞速变小,一会儿,我竟被作文弹了出来。我感谢完周。主编之后,问周。主编下一个作文题目是什么?周主编来不及回答我,边跑边喊道:“我们要去抢救下一位‘作文控’,你还写呀,损失我们可赔不起呀……”

山东省兰陵县大仲村镇月亮湾小学六年级 陶永芳

指导教师 刘中良 杨夫军

作文五:《作文:论作文》500字

说起作文,大家可能都不陌生。但是,对于作文的认识却大相径庭。

有的人为了应付老师留的作业而去完成作文;有的人为了考试作文能得高分,竟然有的把自己的爸爸妈妈写死,据统计,在一次中考作文中“死”的爸爸妈妈高达73%。还有的人呢,就可以算是最高境界了:把作文当成抒发自己心情的一种方式。

举一个别的例子,就说诗吧。古之善为诗者,不自命为诗人者也。其胸中所蓄,高矣,广矣,远矣;而偶发于诗,则诗与之为高广且远焉,故曰善为诗也。曹子建、陶渊明、李太白、杜子美、韩退之、苏子瞻、黄鲁直之伦,忠义之气,高亮之杰,道德之养,经济天下之才,舍而仅为之诗人耳,此数君子岂所甘哉?志在于为诗人而已,为之虽工,其诗则悲且小矣。余执此以衡古人之诗之高下,亦以论今天下之为诗者。使天下中无曹子建、陶渊明、李、杜、韩、苏、黄之徒则已,苟有之,告以吾说,其必不吾非也。

诗和作文不都是一样的吗?有的人认为自己哪里有欠缺,就多加改正,这样看来,大多数的都是作文写的好的。即使是名人,也有三番五次的更改,何必我们呢?还有一类人,也就是自我感觉良好的,认为自己的不比别人差的,大多都是不好的。

其实,我们也可以把作文当做一个朋友,把自己的心里话都表达出来。这样我们才能更好的提升自己。

作文六:《作文:悟作文》600字

以前的我每当听到关于老师对于作文的布置,不是垂头丧气,就是自叹命苦;不是写枯燥无味的流水账,就是从这网址那网址摘的没文佳文;不是无理的瞎掰,就是乱七八糟…总而言之,作文对于以前的我来说,是无感情可言的。

而现在的我不说出口成章,但我把这当成了一种兴趣,一种情感的寄托,总觉得文章在不知不觉中写的有味了。有时还会情不自禁的感叹,往好了说吧,就是所谓的文酸味;往坏了说就是,多愁伤感。悟作文,是在悟一种境界,更是在无对生活的一种态度呵。

每当我问及妈妈时,她总会说,孩子呀,有些事情经历了,便成长了…我不懂,便紧加追问。她便会说,一张白纸洁白无瑕,放进水里时,自然是水色无太大异样;而纸被一小滴墨汁玷污了,在放进水里时,也会多一些杂色…我昂首向天,对这意味深长的话若有所悟的点了点头…看着外面漫天的大雨瓢泼的下着,雨滴儿无情的捶着菊花,一锤子又一锤子,过一会儿雨渐渐地停了。我不禁感叹:“雨过菊开,行人莫摘。雨过,垂败之花已败,留之,则乃意强者也,人亦如此,人生就是一个筛选,而评委就是你自己,自己的舞台应该被自己玩转。如果你不笑,没人替你坚强呵…你也会自动退出这个大舞台。”言罢,叩问苍天:“落花岂非无情物,化作春泥更护花,这样的结局又何尝不好呢?”ﻩ ﻩ小 荷 作文网

看世界万千,悟生活百态…悟,悟作文,悟生活,悟人生态度,学会去悟,你手下的作文奖熠熠生辉;学会去悟,你的人生将无比精彩……

作文七:《想作文——说作文——写作文》1000字

08——09学年第一学期                                                        家长留言

第八课   想作文——说作文——写作文

同学们,动笔写作之前,你想作文吗?其实,每个人都会想的,即使是那些拿起笔来就写的同学,他也要想,只不过是边写边想罢了。那么,想什么,怎样想,写出的作文效果更好呢?

一、指点迷津

想作文,一般可以按此四步走:

想题目—想内容—想结构—想语言。

1、想题目:如果是自己的习作,要想选个什么题目更生动、更准确、更引人;如果是别人命题,就要首先弄清题意,想好如何扣题。这可是你文章的名号!

2、想内容:就是想“写什么,表达什么想法,抒发什么情感,选用那些素材”。你的文章有没有个性和灵魂在此一举!

3、想结构:就是想“先写什么,后写什么;哪部分详,哪部分略”。他可以让你的文章骨架坚挺起来!这一步骤可列提纲。

4、想语言:推敲选用哪个词,用什么样的句式表达上面所想各点。它可以让你的文章“肌肉丰满”哟!这一步骤可边写边想。

二、说说你如何“想作文”

(一)听老师讲故事

1、老师说的这件事,你看起个什么题目好呢?

2、请你用最简洁的语言概括一下老师想说什么?想抒什么情?你怎么知道的?

3、哪句话你现在还记得?

(二)根据题目“小熊过桥”、“那一天,我哭了”编故事

三、例文分析         那盆牵牛花(节选)

爸爸放了一盆牵牛花在我靠窗户的书桌上,本意是想遮掩那扇窗户造成的缺陷,并没有想这小玩艺会给我带来什么。

牵牛花长得特别快,没几个星期,花蔓就已爬满了窗棂。有一天,它的枝蔓竟伸出了窗户,长到阳台上了。我不知怎么生出了莫名其妙的恼怒,一下把外面的一条最长的蔓给拉了下来。看看那下垂的蔓,我不禁感到自己是多么强大。

没几天,那条蔓黄了,最后枯萎了。当时幸灾乐祸的我并未曾想到后来的一幕。

一条新的枝蔓又迅速地伸展,钻到了窗户外,并且超出了我的想象,在阳台外开出了三四朵鲜艳的花,看不到一丝失败的痕迹。

我输了。我对这弱小纤细的植物肃然起敬。并不是因为它艳丽的花朵,而是因为它弱不禁风的身体里坚强执著的灵魂。坚忍不拔地追求既定的目标毫不退缩,也许这才是它真正的魅力所在。

四、写作

“小熊过桥”或“那一天,我哭了”任选其一。

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作文八:《说作文、写作文、改作文》1000字

小学生从一二年级开始的说话、识字、组词、造句等练习中已渗透作文基础知识与技能的训练,从三年级开始写作文,连句成段,由段构篇,由易到难地作文。学生到了五年级,按说是写了近三年的作文了,应基本能写出内容具体、语句通顺连贯、字数在400字以上的作文来。可我教这个班作文时却发现,学生作文存在一个通病:没有内容可写,即使写出来的作文也是非常空洞的,内容不具体。教师根据教材内容布置作文,学生们苦思冥想、绞尽脑汁才凑上二三百字,更有学生从作文选中抄袭一段甚至一篇。这时,老师不要忙于让学生们动手,而是采取先说作文、后写作文、最后改作文的“三步走”方法。

一、说作文

根据本次作文的内容与要求,说出你打算写什么、怎么写。如果写人,要说出写人物的什么品质,通过什么事来反映,再让同学们替他参谋一下是否扣题;如果写事,就要说出写一件还是几件,说清事件的时间、地点、人物、起因、经过、结果,若写几件事要注意详略如何安排,最好选不同方面、不同角度的事。争取让每个学生都说。通过说作文,迫使学生们仔细构思全文,不仅避免了抄袭,最重要的是帮助学生拓展了思维,挖掘了自己的真情实感。如五年级有一篇作文题目是“ⅩⅩ,我想对你说”。说作文前我先提示学生:确定好对谁说,拟定题目;明确想对他说什么,是叙亲情、友情,还是写他的优缺点;想好哪件事最能代表自己的心声;思考先写什么,后写什么,怎样开头结尾等。提示后,要留给学生一定的时间考虑。因为有提示在前,所以学生大多说得条理清晰,作文内容也丰富多彩。有的说长辈对自己的疼爱,有的说自己对好友的忠告,有的说父母过分限制自己的自由,有的涉及父母感情问题,有的说教师对工作的兢兢业业……

二、写作文

在同桌说、小组说之后,我趁热打铁,给一节课时间要求课上完成作文草稿,怎样说的就怎样写,写完之后初步修改一下。这时我发现,大多数学生下笔流畅,有的足足写了四五页之多。

三、改作文

我不是收上草稿自己坐在办公室里圈圈点点,写几行评语,那样发下去之后学生们并不仔细看,起不到指导作文的作用。我采取面批面改的方式。为避免学生养成依赖老师修改的习惯,我要求学生当堂读自己的作文,师生一起帮他挑毛病并提出修改意见,有的毛病学生听不出来,待老师提出后才有所察觉。

以上三步的细致操作,虽然多占用了几课时,但学生几乎都能写出一篇内容具体、语句通顺连贯、条理清晰的作文了,整体作文水平明显提高。

(作者单位:贵州省遵义县茅栗镇长沟小学)

作文九:《英语四级作文作文作文》11000字

英语万能作文(模板型)提出现象:Along with the advance of the society more and more problems are brought to our attention, one of which is that....  随着社会的不断发展,出现了越来越多的问题,其中之一便是____________。  As to whether it is a blessing or a curse, however, people take different attitudes.  然而,对于此类问题,人们持不同的看法。(Hold different attitudes 持不同的看;Come up with different attitudes 有不同的看法)  As society develops, people are attaching much importance to....  随着社会的发展,人们开始关注............  People are attaching more and more importance to the interview during job hunting  求职的过程中,人们慢慢意识到面试的重要性。  As to whether it is worthwhile ....., there is a long-running controversial debate. It is quite natural that people from different backgrounds may have divergent attitudes towards it.  关于是否值得___________的问题,一直以来争论不休。当然,不同的人对此可能持不同的观点。  In the process of modern urban development, we often find ourselves in a dilemma.  在都市的发展中,我们往往会陷入困境。  Recently the phenomenon has aroused wide concern, some people are in alarm that....  最近,这种现象引起了人们的广泛关注,有人开始担心______________。  The human race has entered a pletely new stage in its history, with the increasingly rapid economic globalization and urbanization, more problems are brought to our attention.  人类进入了一个历史的崭新的阶段,经济全球化、都市化的速度不断加快,随之给我们带来了很多问题。  ...... plays such an important role that it undeniably bees the biggest concern of the present world, there es a question, is it a blessing or a curse?ary from person to person.  俗话说,who hold a different view concerning this case.  然而,很多人对此有不同的看法。  问题用词:Issue, phenomenon,后接介词, on, over等。  However, some others argue that... 然而,另一些人则认为_________。  However, there are also some others who contend that...  然而,也有人认为__________。  But other people set forth pletely totally different argument concerning this case.  不过,对于此,另一些人则持完全不同的观点。  Some people examine this issue from another angle.  有的人用另一角度来看这一问题。  On the other hand, there are also many opponents who strongly ...  另一方面,也有很多反对的人,他们认为_____________。自己的观点:    According to my personality and fondness, I would prefer ... rather than...根据我的个性以及兴趣,我选择_______而不会选择__________。  Personally, I side with the latter (former) opinion...  就我个人而言,我支持后者(前者)___________。  Personally, I am in favor of the former point of view.  就我个人而言,我较同意前一种看法。  To my point of view 我认为  To my mind, the advantages far overweigh the drawbacks(disadvantages, shortings)  我认为,优点胜过缺点。  For my part, I stand on side of the latter opinion that..  就我而言,我较赞同后一种观点________________。  As far as I am concerned, I am inclined to be on the side of the latter view.  在我看来,我较同意后一种观点。  After a thorough consideration, for my part, I am in favor of the latter view that...  经过深思熟虑,我较支持后一种看法,亦即________________________。  If asked to make a decision, I would prefer...  如果真的需要作出选择,我宁愿____________。  展现问题,表达观点:  问题的常用词:question, problem, issue  Recently, the issue of ...... has been brought into public focus.  近来,_______的问题引起了社会的广泛关注。  Now we are entering a brand new era full of opportunities and innovations, and great changes have taken place in people’s attitude towards some traditional practice.  现在我们进入了一个充满机遇和创新的崭新时代,很多人对某些传统的看法也发生了很大改变。  Recently the issue of whether or not ... has been in the limelight and has aroused wide concern in the public.  近来,是否_______的问题已经非常明确而且引起了社会的广泛关注。  The issue whether it is good or not to .... has aroused a heated discussion all over the country.  ______的利与弊已在全国范围内引起热烈的讨论。  At present, some people think ....while others claim ...Both sides have their merits.  目前,一些人认为_______而另一些人则认为_______。其实,两种观点都其可取之处。  People rarely reach an absolute consensus on such a controversial issue.  对于这种极具争议的话题,我们很难作出绝对的回答。 People from different backgrounds would put different interpretations on the same case.  不同行业的人对同一种问题的解释不尽相同。  The controversial issue is often brought into public focus. People from different backgrounds hold different attitudes towards the issue.  这中极具争议性的话题往往很受社会的关注。不同的人对此问题的看法也不尽相同。  When asked ..., some people think..... while some prefer...  说到______,有人认为________,而另一些人则认为__________。  Just as the saying goes: 中受益的人对此大家褒奖。  Those who strongly approve of ... have cogent reasons for it.  强烈认同_______的人有很多原因。  Many people would claim that...  有人会认为___________。  People who support ... give some or all of the following reasons.  那些支持_________观点的人列出了如下原因:________。  But others hold the view that ...但是,另外一些人则认为_______。  观点的用词:Attitude, opinion, 与其搭配的动词以及词组:Take, have, e up with,set forth, put forward等。  But on the other hand, there are also quite a few people who strongly advocate that..,.  不过,另一方面,也有少部分人坚持认为_______________。  But people who are ..., on the other hand , maintain that...  不过,另一方面,________的人认为__________。  However, there are a large number of people who hold a different view concerning this case.  然而,很多人对此有不同的看法。  问题用词:Issue, phenomenon,后接介词, on, over等。  However, some others argue that... 然而,另一些人则认为_________。  However, there are also some others who contend that...  然而,也有人认为__________。  But other people set forth pletely totally different argument concerning this case.  不过,对于此,另一些人则持完全不同的观点。  Some people examine this issue from another angle.  有的人用另一角度来看这一问题。  On the other hand, there are also many opponents who strongly ...  另一方面,也有很多反对的人,他们认为_____________。  According to my personality and fondness, I would prefer ... rather than...  根据我的个性以及兴趣,我选择_______而不会选择__________。  Personally, I side with the latter (former) opinion...  就我个人而言,我支持后者(前者)___________。  Personally, I am in favor of the former point of view.  就我个人而言,我较同意前一种看法。  To my point of view 我认为  To my mind, the advantages far overweigh the drawbacks(disadvantages, shortings)  我认为,优点胜过缺点。  For my part, I stand on side of the latter opinion that..  就我而言,我较赞同后一种观点________________。  As far as I am concerned, I am inclined to be on the side of the latter view.  在我看来,我较同意后一种观点。  After a thorough consideration, for my part, I am in favor of the latter view that...  经过深思熟虑,我较支持后一种看法,亦即________________________。If asked to make a decision, I would prefer...  如果真的需要作出选择,我宁愿____________。图表作文:1)ﻩ常用词语:chart 曲线图                 curve曲线statistical chart 统计图         graph 标绘图;图形table 项目标;表格            statistical table 统计表diagram图解;士图            form 表格figure 数字;图形             picture 图画image 肖像;图像             meter 计,表;仪表cartoon漫画                   photo 照片ic 连环漫画               drawing 绘图;图样draft 草图                     painting 绘画map 地图                      blueprint 蓝图sketch 略图;草图              skeleton 轮廓;梗概illustration 插图(图文并存)     plate 版图;插图scheme图解;摘要             design 图案;设计2)ﻩ表示增长、上升、下降、减少的词语:increase 增长;上涨            rise 上升;提高climb徐徐上涨;缓缓上升       bounce 跳跃;弹起go up 上升                    swell 膨胀;增长soar猛增;剧增               skyrocket 突升;猛涨drop 下降,下落               decrease减少;降低fall 减退;减弱                 go down 下降reduce 削减                    decline 削弱;下降dip下降;下沉                 descend 下降;降低3)ﻩ其他词语level off 平稳remain steady /unchanged 稳定不变multiple 倍数                     percentage   百分比outnumber 数量上超过             double 双倍于triple 三倍于                      …times….倍twice as big/much as 比 ….大一倍twice the size of 是….的两倍three times more than 比….多三倍4)ﻩ图表作文常用表达句式a.ﻩAs we can see from the chart (graph/table/diagram…)…b.ﻩThe chart (graph/table/diagram…)shows that…c.ﻩAs is shown in the picture (drawing/photograph…)d.ﻩAs can be seen in the picture (drawing/photograph…)e.ﻩThis chart (graph/table/diagram/cartoon/illustration…)shows minimal (slight/small/steep/rapid/dramatic/sudden/steady/slow/rapid/gradual/sharp…) increase(rise/decrease/decline/fluctuation/reduction/drop…)of/in….f.ﻩFrom the diagram (table/graph/drawing…)we can see clearly…g.ﻩThe table(chart/diagram/curve…) presents…h.ﻩThe above data(statistics/figures) about…i.ﻩFrom the data(figures/statistics) presented in the table(diagram/graph/chart…)we can conclude that…书信:2.ﻩ1)ﻩ称呼  Dear …2)ﻩ正文  如一般议论文一样,建议三段式十句作文3)ﻩ落款  yours faithfully, yours sincerely, best wishes, best regards, love, with lots of love 4)ﻩ日期  右上角5)ﻩ正文内容分类:a. 投诉信   第一段:说明与收信人的相关性,表明写作意图第二段:说明投诉原因,心情,改进建议第三段:希望迅速解决,感谢对方努力常用句型:I am writing to you to plain about …There are some problems with…that I wish to bring to attention. In the first place, ….in the second place,…..To improve the situation, it is advisable to take the following measures. For one thing, …. For another….We believe that you will take this matter seriously from now on and make every effort to prevent its recurrence.b. 询问信     第一段:说明与收信人的相关性,表明写作意图第二段:询问具体问题,强调所需信息的重要性第三段:表达获得信息的强烈愿望,对有关人员表示感谢常用句型: I would like to inquire about some information about…I shall be grateful if you could have details concerning…availableYour prompt and favorable attention to my inquiry would be greatly appreciated.I am looking forward to a favorable reply at your earliest convenience.c. 道歉信     第一段:说明与收信人的相关性,表明写作意图,对某事表示歉意第二段:说明道歉的具体原因第三段:再次表示歉意,请求收信人原谅,并表示你愿意为此做补救常用句型: I am terribly /awfully sorry that….I am afraid what I have done has caused many inconveniences to you.I must make a sincere and humble apology to you for…I sincerely hope that you will kindly accept my apologies.d. 感谢信     第一段:说明与收信人的相关性,表明写作意图,向对方表示诚挚的谢意第二段:高度评价对方的帮助,列举为何对对方心存感激第三段:再次表示感谢常用句型: I am greatly indebted to you for what you have done.I deeply appreciate your courtesy and we hope to havew the opportunity of rewarding your kindness.It was kind and generous of you to do this for me, and I appreciate it more than I can say.Words fail me when I want to express my gratitude to you.Again, I would like to express our warm thanks to you..e. 邀请信    第一段:说明与收信人的相关性,表明写作意图,发出邀请第二段:说明邀请的具体原因,邀请内容第三段:表示强烈的期盼,并希望尽快得到答复常用句型:  I am pleased to invite you to participate in… to be held from …to…in…It is my pleasure to extend an invitation to you to go traveling with me.We were wondering if the session could consist of…Would you please let me know as soon as possible if you can accept my invitation?f. 求职信   第一段:表明信息来源,并说明写作意图第二段:介绍相关工作经历、学习经历以及个人本性,以表明你可以胜任这个职位第三段:表示强烈的期盼,并希望尽快得到答复常用句型:   I have read your advertisement in ….of June 26 for a secretary, and should be grateful if you consider me favorably as a candidate for the position.I am keen to apply for a job vacancy with your pany.I graduated with a BA degree/a Master’s degree/ a Doctorate degree in…. from …. I am fairly experienced/proficient/petent/skillful in…I hope you would take my application into account favorably and entitle me to an interview.g. 求学信      第一段:简单自我介绍,并说明写作意图第二段:介绍相关工作经历、学习经历以及个人本性第三段:表示强烈的期盼,并希望尽快得到答复常用句型:  I am greatly interested in your graduate program in College of Law and wish to apply for admission.Would you be so kind as to provide me with some relevant information?I will certainly feel honored if I could be admitted to your university, which, renowned for its long history and a fine tradition of scholarship, enjoys a worldwide fame.h. 推荐信    第一段:说明写作意图,并说明推荐人与被推荐人之间的关系第二段:说明推荐原因,介绍被推荐人的相关工作经历、学习经历及个人秉性第三段:表示感谢和期待常用句型: I am very glad to remend to you a former student of mine,….., to be an ideal candidate for….In view of his acplishments, I am firmly convinced that he will make a successful graduate students.

作文十:《考研作文大作文小作文》17100字

网络购物

As is vividly demonstrated in the drawing above, online shopping was

undergoing rapid development with its modity value increasing.

The reasons for the popularity of online shopping can be analysed with respect to

the availability of Internet and the advantanges of the online shopping mode. First of

all,with the development of the Internet and the popularization of puters,online

shopping has bee a momplace in our life. Here consumers can buy almost

everything they need. In addition, online shopping has a host of advantages,of which

the most important is perhaps its convenience. People don’t have to waste a large

amount of their anergy and precious time to go from one shop to another to choose the

modities they like. This is especially desirable to the old, the sick and the busy

people who cannot go to the shops in person. Furthermore, the goods e in all

shapes,sizes and colors on the Internet.All they need to do is to sit in front of their

puters and click the mouse.The modities they order will be delivered to them

promptly.

In conclusion, online shopping does cater to the social development and provide

us with a novel way of modern life. Thriving electronic merce undoubtly

contributes to the prosperity of our economy. Therefore,let’s get prepared to embrace

this modern business trend.

应对压力

The set of pictures present a sharp contrast scene of two girls facing heavy

pressure. The left girl, looking rather painful, is trapped under heavy pressure, while

the other girl sits on the pile of stress and plays happily with a flying bird. Obviously,

the picture shows two different attitudes people hold when faced with stress.

The picture might set us into(使开始实施)thinking how to cope with stress.

Here are some tips. First of all, keep optimistic. Studies suggest that the feeling of

helplessness undermines the body’s immune system. On the contrary, optimists will

feel in control of their own life and acts quickly, reaching out for advice, and looking

for solutions. In many successful medical treatment cases, what keeps a patient alive

is their optimism and willpower. In addition, to accept the pressure. Stress of study,

work and life are ubiquitous, but we should not just resist and escape it. Actually,

there always is trouble and problems once we chose a path to go, because almost

everything worth doing is not so easy. Furthermore, solve the problem, rather than

plain about it. Many people plain about the surroundings and don’t think

about the solutions when faced with problems.

If we hold an optimistic attitude, we can make our life better and e

through distressful periods with more physical and mental vigor(活力). Evidently,

what determines our choice between “flying” or “fighting” will be our attitudes

towards life, not the stress itself.

其他有关压力的句子:

A man can hardly bear the heavy pressure of his life.

In fact ,it is not the bad thing as it is often supposed to be.A certain amount of stress

is vital to provide motivation and gives purpose to life.

Since we cannot remove stress from our lives,we need to find ways to deal with it.

环境污染与保护

The pictures symbolically illustrate pollution is being increasingly serous

around the globe. In the first cartoon, a man is scorching the earth on a chimney. In

the second one, a famous ancient Chinese poet, Wang Bois astonished by the heavy

smoke poured by chimneys into the air and dirty river polluted by a factory. We are

informed that “the autumn river is the same color with the sky”.

翻译:这些图画象征性地描述了全球污染正在日益严重。在第一副图中,一

个人正在烟囱上烘烤地球。在第二副图中,中国古代著名诗人王勃,被烟囱排放

到大气中的浓烟和被工厂排放的废水污染的河流惊呆了。文字说明显示:“秋天

共长天一色”。

The drawer is sending a message about the significance of the need for

everyone to fight against the danger of environmental pollution. There is no

denying that the industry is indications of civilization, progress and development.

Unfortunately, as industry develops, so will the number of factories, and the

amount of industry pollutants. We are so development-oriented that we almost

can sacrifice our blue sky and pure water for the purpose of obtaining a little

material gain.

翻译:画家传达了如下重要信息:每个人都必须抵制环境污染的危害。毫无

疑问,工业是文明、进步与发展的标志。然而,随着工业的发展,工厂与工业污

染物的数量同时增加。我们如此以发展为导向,以至于为了获取一点物质利益,

几乎牺牲了蓝天净水。

As a consequence,it is imperative for us to take drastic actions. On the one

hand, the factories should be equipped with devices which can dispose of waste gas

and water in a bid(企图)to prevent them from polluting our planet. On the other

hand ,there should be an increasingly loud voice from the public for firm measures

against poisonous(有毒)gas sent off and unhealthy water polluted by factories.

翻译:因此,我们急需采取严厉措施。一方面,工厂应该配备能够处理废气

和废水的设施,以阻止它的污染我们的星球。另一方面,公众应该加大呼吁采取

稳固措施的力度,控制工厂排放的毒气和污染的废水。

幸福感

Happiness is a topic that people frequently talk about ,for everyone seeks

happiness in his life .But where happiness lie? Some people deem that happiness

lies in money,spacious splendid residence , in beautiful private cars ,in delicious food

and expensive clothing ,in a handsome boyfriend or a pretty girlfriend .All this is true,

but all is is not the essence of happiness.

Happiness mainly lies in one’s feeling, in one’s state of mind , in one’s

satisfaction from his career. As we all know,although someone is a millionaire and

leads a life in luxury, he may feel unhappy,and there are quite a few people who are

not rich and live a simple life ,but they always feel very happy. They are happy

because they can face everything bravely,and because they can derive pleasure from

their simple life and their career. If a person can get rid of envy ,greed and  be

generous ,openhearted and hard-working ,he is sure to be happy.

Long-term happiness is based on honesty, hard work ,contribution ,and

self-esteem.Happiness is not an end ; it is a continuous process which makes you

contribute to others and makes you feel you are valuable and happy person .As

Dr.Wayne wrote, “There is no way to happiness .Happiness is the way.”.

首先,为了避免简单重复,尽量使用同义词和近义词去表述。

例如,“增加”可用increase,rise,grow,climb,go up,soar等;“重要”可用

important,critical,vital, significant,crucial等。但要注意词汇的准确性,即必须还

要考虑适合的语境。例如:眼睛“大”,很显然great,large,huge,vast, titanic, enormous

etc,这些“大”修饰眼睛是不恰当的,而只能使用big来修饰。

其次,多使用词性变化来丰富自己的表达手段。

和汉语一样,变化词性也是丰富英语表达的重要途径,是提高英语水平的重要标志。如

果能够用to voice some different opinions 来替代to give/express some different

opinions; 或to double/triple 来表示翻倍或增加三倍则会使文章在表达上更为形象而生

动。

最后,多使用派生形式来点缀文章亮点。

英语的构词特点就是使用前缀、后缀来完成灵活多变的语言特色。例如,It is of great

importance/help/use/significance来替代it is very

important/significant/helpful/useful 本身就是英语水平的一个综合展示。另外,作文

中如果能够出现not unnecessary/not unimportant 来表达非常重要或者必要,则更能显

示我们的英语功底。

一、表达我认为:

I hold the opinion that...

I cling to the idea that...

As far as I am concerned ...

二、表达原因理由:

所以/结果:hence, thus, therefore, thereby

因为/由于:because of, owing to, due to

三、表达转折:

Conversely, Nevertheless, Unfortunately, Whereas, Yet, Instead, In parison,

By contrast, On the contrary

四、表达总结归纳:

As a result, Consequently, Accordingly, Generally speaking,Briefly speaking

五、能使作文层次清晰的连接词:

第一:In the first place, First and foremost, Above all, On the one hand, For

one thing

第二:In the second place, Besides, In addition, What is more, Furthermore,

Moreover, On the other hand, For another

第三:Finally,Last but not least, More importantly, Even worse 小作文

考研小作文万能模板

辞职信

模板1:

Dear     I am writing to inform you about the decision to resign from my current position.

There are a few factors involved.

First and foremost, .

I would like to take this opportunity to express my gratitude for the rewarding

experience that I have enjoyed during my employment.

I sincerely wish you could approve of my resignation, and I apologize in advance

for any inconvenience thus caused.

Yours  Sincerely,

Li  Ming

模板2

Dear     I am sure it will e as no surprise that I wish to resign my position

as pany / organization, there are a few reasons that force me to give up my current

work.

For one . For Moreover / Besides / In

I appreciate the plenty of help and encouragement from you constantly, and I am

very sorry for any inconvenience thus caused. I promise that I will stay through the

next month to help you find a replacement for my position.

Yours  Sincerely,

Li  Ming

请求信

模板1:

Dear

I am  / can provide me with the

information of . The reasons for my urgent need of are as

Therefore, I will be much obliged if you can help me to call me at

Thank you for your time and patience, and I look forward to your prompt reply.

Yours   Sincerely,

Li Ming

模板2:

Dear

My name is , and I am . I have made up my mind to write to

you in the hope that you can furnish me with the information regarding .

At the present I am preparing / doing and am in lack of          that is crucial for the work / project / program. Therefore, it would be of great help if I

can have your help for as I have to  soon.

I am praying for your reply with full appreciation.

Yours sincerely,

Li Ming

建议信

模板1:

Dear

I am very glad to hear that you want to seek some suggestions about          in order to     From my point of . Also, to you, I highly remend

that is unnecessary for you to .

I hope that my opinions are of help to you, and please feel free to contact me for

more questions.

Yours sincerely,

Li Ming

模板2:

Dear

I am writing to express my views concerning In the first place, I

would like to say thank you for the help and everything else you have been offering to

us. Meanwhile, I also want to make some advice to better     Firstly, we have found that . Secondly, we want to . Finally,

we hope that     I am looking forwards to your consideration about my proposals. Thanks in

advance for that.

Yours sincerely,

Li Ming

求职信

模板1:

To Whom It May Concern,

I have learnt from yesterday’s newspaper that you are employing I

wish to be considered as an applicant for the position, and beg to state my

qualifications as follows:

I am  years old, a major student of  University

/ College. During my academic years, I have shown excellent performance and have

been awarded first-class scholarship each year. In addition to my educational

background, I have the rich work experience in the fields of . Therefore, I

believe I can be of value to your pany.

Enclosed is my resume for your reference, and I shall be glad to call at your

office if you desire an interview. Thank you.

Yours sincerely,

Li Ming

模板2:

Dear

I learned from my university BBS that there is a vacancy for a

position which I am very interested in.

I am a senior student from University, majoring in . Under

the influence of the courses I have taken, I develop a special interest in Moreover, I have attained a fair knowledge and experience in this field due to my

internship at role of  in such a pany as yours.

For further information please refer to my attached resume. I should be please to

attend for an interview at your convenience.

Yours sincerely,

Li Ming

道歉信

模板1:过去没有完成的事情

Dear

I am writing this letter to apologize to you for my failing to .

The reason is that . I am sorry that I cannot finish  in time,

but is it possible that I make up the loss by aside to     I do hope that you can understand my situation and accept my apology.

Yours sincerely,

Li Ming

模板2:将来不能做的事情

Dear

Much to my regret / I am terribly sorry that I am unable to It is

mainly because at that time I will be full occupied by  which is quite out

of my expectation, and that conflicts with your . Therefore I am forced to

adjust my schedule and cannot make my presence on your I sincerely

hope that you will enjoy a good time. By the way, can we have dinner together some

time next week? I hope to see you soon.

I am really sorry again and I trust that you will understand.

Yours sincerely,

Li Ming

感谢信

模板1:

Dear

I should like this message to be taken as an expression of heartfelt gratitude to

you and If it had not been for your assistance in giving me aid

and I fear that During the , you have given me

generous help and continuous guidance by     Thus, I really appreciate by

Finally, I feel most obliged to thank you once more.

Yours sincerely,

Li Ming

模板2:

Dear

On behalf of I would like to extend our most sincere gratitude

for . We appreciate greatly your aid in not only , but

also .

It is said that your that we could enjoy such a wonderful trip / arrive

at such splendid achievements, and we will never forget your painstaking labor and

full cooperation / warm hospitality.

With this letter we would also like to formally invite you to so

that . WE look forwards to hosting you .

With personal regards.

Yours sincerely,

Li Ming

申请信

模板1:

To Whom It May Concern,

I would like to apply for the master’s program in department of your

university, an opportunity that I have dreamed since

To briefly introduce myself, I am a senior student majoring in  from          University. During my undergraduate study I have demonstrated excellent academic

ability, which is reflected in my grades and acplishment. I have attached to this

letter my resume, a plete transcript, and three remendation letters.

I would greatly appreciate it if you could kindly consider my application. If you

require more information, please feel free to contact me at

Looking forwards to your reply.

Yours sincerely,

Li Ming

模板2:

I am a senior student in the Department of My major interests are and I understand your university has a good

program in those fields. Therefore, I would like to apply for a place at your graduate

school.

It would be great if you can mail me copies of the required application forms.

Meanwhile, I also would like to apply for a scholarship, so could you please send me

this application form as well?

Your assistance will be highly appreciated. I am looking forwards to hearing

from you.

yours Sincerely,

Li Ming

投诉信

模板1:

Dear Manager,

Last week I bought at your store and when I got it home it did not

work at all. When I tried to return it to the store, I was told that I could not get

refunded.

The sign in your store says that money is returned within 7 days of purchase if

any problem exists, and I did that within the said time. Thus I insist that I should have

my money back by return to you store。If I do not receive any

satisfying response, I will further plain to the Consumer Protection Association.

Yours Sincerely,

Li Ming

模板2:

To Whom It May Concern,

I am writing to plain about the poor service of your I

received when .

The reasons for my dissatisfaction lie upon three points as follows:

. Under these circumstances, I find

it difficult to     I am sure that you are able to thoroughly understand my discontent, which you

are bound to replace with a satisfactory solution. I would be grateful if you could             as soon as possible.

Yours sincerely,

Li Ming

询问信

模板1:

Dear

I am writing to see if it is possible for you to provide some information

regarding     Currently, I am doing / planning / organizing and am in urgent need of the following things. First of all, . Thirdly, .

I would also like to inquire if     Your prompt attention would be highly appreciated, and thank you for your

consideration.

Yours sincerely,

Li Ming

模板2:

Dear

I am , and I would like to have some information about     At the present, I am doing  and I intend to . Therefore, I

should be very obliged if you would kindly furnish me with details

concerning .

I am expecting your reply with heartfelt appreciation.

Yours sincerely,

Li Ming

邀请信

模板1:

Dear

I will be holding  at  on  in order to As you are a close friend of our family, my parents and I would very much like you to

join us in  and share our joy.

The occasion will start at and activities include ,

and time.

My family would feel honored by your presence.

Yours sincerely,

Li Ming

模板2:

Dear     On behalf of hometown for

It would give us great pleasure if you could deliver a speech on the topic of          during the visit, because to  if     During your stay in we would like to offer you

with .

We would appreciate it very much if you could accept our invitation.

Yours sincerely,

Li Ming

祝贺信

模板1:

Dear

Congratulations on your . I know how hard you have been working

and I am very proud of you for your achievement.

I understand for sure that it is your hard work / your excellent ability that leads

you to the current success. This new position, on the other hand, adds a new

dimension to your life and is bound to What’s more, I also believe

that .

May all goes beautifully in your new post!

Yours sincerely,               Li Ming

模板2:

Dear

Good news travels fast! It was delightful for me to hear that . Please

accept my sincere congratulations to your I have been watching your progress with admiration all the years, and I know

more than anyone else how much effort you have put in. Now you prove to me a

matured and well-rounded in every respect. Judging from your current

success / achievement, I am confident that in the future May all the years ahead fulfill your dreams!                Yours sincerely,

Li   Ming

投诉信

Dear_______,

I am . (自我介绍) I feel bad to trouble you but I am afraid that I have to make a plaint about_______.

The reason for my dissatisfaction is ______________(总体介绍)。 In the first place,_________________________(抱怨的第一个方面)。 In addition,

____________________________(抱怨的第二个方面)。 Under these circumstances, I find it ___(感觉) to ____________________________(抱怨的方面给你带来的后果)。

I appreciate it very much if you could_______________________(提出建议和请求), preferably __________(进一步的要求), and I would like to have this matter settled by ______(设定解决事情最后期限)。

Thank you for your consideration and I will be looking forward to your reply.   Yours sincerely

Li Ming